Discussion about types of paragraph always interesting.
Exactly when, I discussed with Aris about Narrative paragraph. Beginning I
confused with written by Aris, because I thought his paragraph was not
Narrative paragraph but resemble with Descriptive paragraph and I commented
much commentary on his paper. He wrote about vocation on interesting place namely
Bali island when he was in Senior high school, he was leaner told and described
about Bali island not his experience. So it made me confused whatever this
paragraph is Narrative or Descriptive. I did not find the answer, so I asked to
Miss Vita, from her explanation, I had known that in Narrative we can describe
something but do not too detail. From this explanation I knew that Aris’s
paragraph were true Narrative paragraph not Descriptive paragraph. Sorry Aris,
hehe.
And I did not forget... Presentation last week was enjoyable
and so fun. Exactly, Yogi’s presentation about Descriptive paragraph. All of
classmates confused by his paragraph, because on his paragraph unrelated
between main idea and supporting sentences. There were some friends said that
was Explanation paragraph and Definition paragraph. And then Lilis asked to
him, what he modified his paragraph and he answered “yes”….. He resumed his paragraph.
All of classmates laughed and Miss Vita too. Spirit Yogi, You can do it!
I think, we must be careful and accurate to make or find out
a paragraph
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